Wow.. this is purely amazing! I was pulled in by the first paragraph! I felt like I was there, I feel like I need to go there. You have a way of explaining that makes the reader see it through your eyes. Portraying your emotions the way that you have, I felt every one of them.
Wow.. this is purely amazing! I was pulled in by the first paragraph! I felt like I was there, I feel like I need to go there. You have a way of explaining that makes the reader see it through your eyes. Portraying your emotions the way that you have, I felt every one of them.